Wednesday, April 1, 2009

A Pinch Of Happiness..


"Finally Happy?
Always wanted to have Distances..
Permission Granted.
All your efforts are paid now,
Your ruthlessness,Your rudeness,your ignorance.

Stop all this now..
You dont have to take any more deliberate efforts!!
I'll not bother you much now."

Take it easy!


Enjoy!!

20 comments:

yamini meduri said...

simple it loooks but the message it delivers is a bit confusing...!!!

wats the post about???

Gauri Mathur said...

Hey Yamini..!!
Thhank you for dropping in often now..
It feels good!!
:-)
Generally posts like this sounds bit out of the track,because its integeral voice of ones innerself.
:)

Hopeless Romantic said...

Can you please explain this post to me....I can interpret it in diff ways..but i want to know ur feelings what made u write this :)..wld wait fr ur response..u cn drop me a mail also @ loveisalwaysnew@gmail.com :)

Gauri Mathur said...

Oye Hopeless!
Ki Hua??
Banda likh nahi sakhta ab aise..!!
:D:D
And dont interpret it any ways dost:)Let the feelings be the same wich is within and underneath..
No mixing.!
:D

Hopeless Romantic said...

well, ur too late..i have already interpreted it in 2 different ways atleast...n u shld nt write smthing which cnt b understoood :P

Aaap to likh deti ho..aur yahan analyse karne mein raat ke 12 baj chuke hain...sigh !!

But i still want to know ...if thats nt a bit nosey :D

Gauri Mathur said...

Yaar mei apne liye likhte huu:)
Whenever I am overfilled with certain emotions,I vent out this way n feels light!!:)

Hopeless Romantic said...

Likho bhai humne kab mana kiya...but u feel light n others start feeling heavy :D

I'll take ur words but i am not satisfied :P

Hopeless Romantic said...

n ya do read my short story i posted yesterday...n let me know what u feel like...indirectly i am asking for a nice..long..comment :P

Gauri Mathur said...

:P:P
Only u have started feeling heavy..
Duh:P

N story padlounge..:)thoda time de buss..after 6th karte huu,,exam hai imp vala..uske baadfursat se padkar comment karte huu..
AcHas VALAS..:D:D

Hopeless Romantic said...

ek story padhne ke liye 6 tarik tak wait...yeh bahut naainsaafi hain.....itne mein to mein 2-3 aur likh deta hooon....karthi rehne sab par ek ek karke comments :P

how can i explore ME... said...

i guess u r talking about sm1 whom u left for sm reason....isnt it...??.....i like out of focus post....:)

jayaram said...

Deliberate efforts 2 confuse.

Gauri Mathur said...

@How can I explore me..
Hmmm..!
@JayaramDas Uncle..
:)

jayaram said...

Strange...................?

Sure u can spend some time 4 my blog. Plenty 4 u 2 brood over.

Pallav said...

i m confused...???
but but but not going to ask anythng bcz ur fellow readers had already asked..

i think u hv written for urself to stop all doing this thing...
i guess..
dont worry need not answer..its ur blog so u can write ur emotions n vent out anythng....
heehehe...
cheers:)

Gauri Mathur said...

@JayaramDas uncle,,I rememeber to visit ur latest updates will do so soon..
:)

@Pallav,,there are times when u just want to vent out ur thoughts,may be negative thoughts and may not sensible all the the times bec it like u scriblling spoantaneously,whatever is runnig in ur mind,these few lines are piece of that...
take care..

Girl Next Door said...

great lines :)

BrownPhantom said...

I don't understand "Why the confusion?". The only interpretation I can think of is :
The guy had been indifferent in the relationship and wanted to distance himself from the girl. He probably didn't have the courage to say it on her face; so he ws resorting to being rude and forgetful. Girl picks up the hints of course and says goodbye. These were her lines.

Gauri Mathur said...

@Girl next door..
Thanks :)

@Brown Phantom
Uhmmmm... Understanding!!!
:)

sawan said...

wish its fiction. if it is : good work of imagination. if it is not: you take care of yourself.